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Claudia
Apr 29, 2011 22:09:39 GMT -5
Post by Claudia Donovan on Apr 29, 2011 22:09:39 GMT -5
Name: Claudia Age: real? 16. For the RP? 20-ish. Gender: Female Appearance: Personality: Awkward and never really relates to other people, brilliant (when you don't fit in you have lots of time to read novels), mostly a loner because awkward people have very few friends, carries a grudge against everyone who has ever hurt her because with her awkwardness the others were always cruel, loves soft, cute things like cats or foxes (ergo Purrloins, Glameows, Skittys, Eevees, Vulpix, Zorua) because they always bring comfort. Can't stand bugs at all (too many legs o.O), not a fan of dirty things or vegetables. Can't stand to see any animal in pain (reverence for life), and only raises Pokemon with cute features or a petite build. Background: Never really fit in, angry at the world and using Team Rocket to lash out at those who hurt her in her past, a past which she refuses to tell anyone much of anything about. Alliance: Team Rocket (for now *shifty eyes*) Team: Team CLAUDIA! *hit* Pokemon Team: Verdant the Summer Umbreon (male, lvl 45(capped)) Ability: Synchronize Moves: Shadow Ball , Confuse Ray , Psychic , Toxic Frost Leaves the Winter Leafeon (male, lvl 45(capped)) Ability: Leaf Guard Moves: X-Scissor , Razor Leaf , Dig , Aerial Ace Petal the Spring Glaceon (female, lvl 45(capped)) Ability: Ice Body Moves: Wish , Ice Beam , Attract , Fake Tears Lush the Summer Espeon (male, lvl 45(capped)) Ability: Synchronize Moves: Shadow Ball , Return , Psychic , Bite Blossom the Spring Flareon (female, lvl 45(capped)) Ability: Flash Fire Moves: Quick Attack , Ember , Flame Charge , Incinerate All moves are learn-able by the respective Eeveelutions. I checked Bulbapedia. Some are TM moves, others are move tutor moves or egg moves but all are Eeveelution-possible Moves.
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Claudia
May 1, 2011 16:52:43 GMT -5
Post by Marche on May 1, 2011 16:52:43 GMT -5
In case you are wondering, I'm waiting for Tara's word on if you can use V.Vulpix or not. However, I can tell you that if you want to be accepted, you will need to flesh out just about every section of your profile. We need a bit more of a history and personality, along with the moves of your Pokemon
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Post by Tara on May 2, 2011 7:08:20 GMT -5
Like Marche said, you need more in the Personality and Background areas. I don't mind the use of event pokemon, since it's only a sprite change, but your Pokemon need to have their four moves, and cannot be "above the level cap."
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Claudia
May 8, 2011 16:02:00 GMT -5
Post by Claudia Donovan on May 8, 2011 16:02:00 GMT -5
Like Marche said, you need more in the Personality and Background areas. I don't mind the use of event pokemon, since it's only a sprite change, but your Pokemon need to have their four moves, and cannot be "above the level cap." Well in that I meant that they'd need to be capped because all of them are leveled around 60 on V-dex...
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DarkChaos44
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Claudia
May 8, 2011 16:22:19 GMT -5
Post by DarkChaos44 on May 8, 2011 16:22:19 GMT -5
Tara means that you have to adjust their levels to Lv. 15 since your a rookie. So instead of putting "above level cap", just put Lv. 15 and you don`t have to worry about it until you go up a rank.
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Claudia
May 8, 2011 20:01:03 GMT -5
Post by Tara on May 8, 2011 20:01:03 GMT -5
Thank you for helping to clarify that, Chaos.
Your pokemon can be level 90000000000 on VDex (yes I know that's not possible, this is just an example), but it could be level 20 for the sake of the rp. It would be a pain to say that your pokemon on Vdex had to be exactly the same level as the pokemon on the rp. That's why we have level caps. It takes effect where the pokemon is made to be level 15 in the rp, or whatever you level cap is, even if their levels are much higher than that of the pokemon's cap on the rp. The opposite, however, does not happen. They have to be the same level or higher than the level cap. You can't try to pass off a level 3 Pokemon on VDex for a level 65 in the rp.
...am I making any sense? I have a horrible headache at the moment, and I'm probably blabbering on and on like an idiot.
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Claudia
May 10, 2011 19:56:34 GMT -5
Post by Claudia Donovan on May 10, 2011 19:56:34 GMT -5
Thank you for helping to clarify that, Chaos. Your pokemon can be level 90000000000 on VDex (yes I know that's not possible, this is just an example), but it could be level 20 for the sake of the rp. It would be a pain to say that your pokemon on Vdex had to be exactly the same level as the pokemon on the rp. That's why we have level caps. It takes effect where the pokemon is made to be level 15 in the rp, or whatever you level cap is, even if their levels are much higher than that of the pokemon's cap on the rp. The opposite, however, does not happen. They have to be the same level or higher than the level cap. You can't try to pass off a level 3 Pokemon on VDex for a level 65 in the rp. ...am I making any sense? I have a horrible headache at the moment, and I'm probably blabbering on and on like an idiot. This is why I simply stated that they need to be capped... at least it felf simple to me >.<
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Claudia
May 11, 2011 7:08:14 GMT -5
Post by Tara on May 11, 2011 7:08:14 GMT -5
I understand. However, the point of the cap was to make the pokemon's level in the RP their cap, so in your case, your Vulpix are all level 15. If that even makes sense. xD;
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Claudia
May 12, 2011 19:56:46 GMT -5
Post by Claudia Donovan on May 12, 2011 19:56:46 GMT -5
I understand. However, the point of the cap was to make the pokemon's level in the RP their cap, so in your case, your Vulpix are all level 15. If that even makes sense. xD; Yup! Well, for now.
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Claudia
May 13, 2011 8:22:53 GMT -5
Post by Tara on May 13, 2011 8:22:53 GMT -5
xD yes, for now~.
However, you're still going to need to edit the first post and add in more to the personality, background, all of that stuff, as well as edit the levels of your Vulpix. I can't approve your profile until then.
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Claudia
Jun 19, 2011 21:49:37 GMT -5
Post by Claudia Donovan on Jun 19, 2011 21:49:37 GMT -5
Added stuff *flaps arms so you'll come look*
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Claudia
Jun 20, 2011 3:23:54 GMT -5
Post by GenepeOrgel on Jun 20, 2011 3:23:54 GMT -5
You haven't addressed the 'flesh out your everything' bit; I'd like to ask more of your Personality and Background section.
This is to show that you are able to roleplay literately and efficiently amongst this roleplay forum, as well as allowing others to know about your character better. It's fine if you want to keep certain parts of your character secret so that you can develop them later in the roleplay, but we can't start off this with only lulzy descriptions.
The length would vary according to how well-written it is, but I'd expect no less than two meaningful sentences for the Personality and four meaningful sentences or a paragraph for Back ground.
To help you out: - personality: You could write about what your character (dis)likes, what their hobby includes, and perhaps elaborate more on what you already have.
- Background: You don't have to start off from when they were born, but something which tells us why your character is "awkward, brilliant, mostly a loner, carries a grudge against everyone who has ever hurt her, never really fit in, angry at the world and using Team Rocket to lash out at those who hurt her in her" etc etc. Oh, and how your character obtained their Pokemons can also be an interesting addition. Like I said, you don't have to reveal to us ALL the details if you'd rather let it develop in the roleplay; hinting in places and telling about the events that ultimately led to this conclusion is fine, too.
Remember, what you write here, minus the history, is not set to stone. Your character's(dis)likes, personality and all that can change throughout your roleplay.
In short: more Personality/Background please.
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Claudia
Jun 21, 2011 13:13:27 GMT -5
Post by Claudia Donovan on Jun 21, 2011 13:13:27 GMT -5
*waves arms with less bravado than before* I think it's done...
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DarkChaos44
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Post by DarkChaos44 on Jul 7, 2011 0:20:29 GMT -5
I think your done. Although I think Genepe and/or Tara may still need a little bit more backstory from you. If thats the case then you can put in a random goal for your character like "Wants to at least meet a celebrity trainer" (Like my character Chaos Blackburn or just make up something like that) or just something. It can be anything just not too big.
But I'll try to get Tara's attension on this so that she can approve your character and you can begin rp-ing with us. But I'm sorry that we kept you waiting on approval. Its just that the rp site has been slow nowandays since most of the regulars here have more important stuff than the site or something.
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Claudia
Jul 7, 2011 17:27:02 GMT -5
Post by Claudia Donovan on Jul 7, 2011 17:27:02 GMT -5
Thank you.
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Claudia
Aug 8, 2011 10:37:28 GMT -5
Post by Tara on Aug 8, 2011 10:37:28 GMT -5
I apologize for taking forever and a day to get to this, but I'm back from my hiatus. Yes, your profile looks great, and the levels and moves of your pokemon seem fine. I'll go ahead and move this to the approved character section. ^^
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